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YOU
Contributed by
kittie30
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:54:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You are what's in my mind constantly, cant get you out, you're all i think about, all that goes in and out of my head.
There Is NO! Key!
Or Is There?
Even now i cant approach you i still try to go on with out you. it is not working very well, that is why i am in this state of mind. All my thoughts are about you day and night you are the one that walks, runs, and screams in my dreams.
Door Is Locked
Or
Is It?
As you hide behind a fence i try to save you. When you cry i yell in pain. When you laugh i am ashamed that i cant do it.
You Know There Is A
Window
But Is It
Shut?
If You have an answer plz share:)
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kittie30
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2004-05-18 13:54:07]
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Re: YOU
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:07:37 PM AEST
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such a good write liked the line: 'Even now i cant approch you i still try to go on with out you. it is not working very well, that is why i am in this state of mind.'
very fond of this -0 feel mixed after reading it... provoked emotion which is good!! very cool!!
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Re: YOU
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:20:51 PM AEST
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something tells me that you should get something else stuck into your mind set. things will go happier for you that way. that's my answer, ha! joking... no but really, i seriously think that you have little ele to do when you sound WAY too preoccupied...
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