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Goddess of the Night
Contributed by
kailadragon
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:45:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I am the Goddess of the Night
I rule o'er the moon and his silvery light
I clothe the dark in velvety drapes
my diamonds, the stars, are my frieght
I drape myself in Nights dark clothes
I control the tide's ebbs and flows
A crown of stars around my head
with the Dusk I share my bed
the shooting stars are twinkles in my eye
my power give consent to make it fly
I rule o'er all past the day
Maybe I can teach the night to stay
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kailadragon
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Re: Goddess of the Night
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by shorty_52 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:51:26 PM AEST
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this is really good! there doesn't seem to be enoght fantasy poetry. thanx for sharing, it was really good!
~allyson~ |
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Re: Goddess of the Night
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:56:42 PM AEST
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'the shooting stars are twinkles in my eye
my power give consent to make it fly'
nice imagary - i enjoyed the read very much :) |
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Re: Goddess of the Night
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by kittie30 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:04:02 PM AEST
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| great write i liked it |
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Re: Goddess of the Night
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:29:09 PM AEST
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i wonder, wearing all that stuff (the dimonds, the drapes and what-not) - doesn't it get heavy?!? lol, great imagery, loved it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Goddess of the Night
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by Sonibe on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 04:39:45 PM AEST
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....this has a nice ring to it....and it sounds like a certain phrase according to Project "M" (if you dont know what Project "M" is....don't worry about it)....but I like it....therefore I say....Bravo, bravo.
Ai,
Sir Sonibe |
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