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see you, see me
Contributed by
shorty_52
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:20:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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you turn your head
and see my face
you walk toward me
at a steady pace.
i turn around
and see you there
i walk away
and begin to glare.
you keep on walking
and pretend not to see
the evil look
i gave to thee.
i turn to see
if you still walk towards me
i finally stop
when your two yards in back of me.
once again
i glare at thee
i want to know
why you follow me.
you look at me
with eyes of blue
then you ask me if
i'll go out with you.
i look into
your eyes so blue
and ask you why
you want me and you.
you tell me why
then i begin to blush
i guess i have
a little crush.
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Re: see you, see me
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:59:09 PM AEST
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bloody hell! this was very good - felt so detailed then i look at the appearance and it looks so short - well done its very interesting - especially love last 4 lines very sweet...
-feel free to comment on mine btw... |
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Re: see you, see me
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by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:49:24 PM AEST
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so descriptive and its just like that no matter how hard you try to fight the feeling
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Re: see you, see me
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:41:23 PM AEST
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damn... i'd pee my pants if i got that glare!!
~Remy~ |
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Re: see you, see me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:04:40 PM AEST
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ahh, but it was the glare that won my heart.
keep writing! |
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