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Do i really know you.?
Contributed by
LouisaMontagu
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:19:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Like a lid that covers its contents thats just what you could be,
Secretive and sly all things that i cant see,
How do i know if i know, im just led to believe,
To think i really know you and hope you wont deceive,
Like the foil that covers the outside you cant see in or out,
Do i really know you is this what they call doubt?
Am i over-reacting, no this just came into mind,
That maybe we are strangers, you are another kind..
How do i know I know you seven years down the line,
Eyes can hide such secrets, where you ever really mine..??
Copyright ©
LouisaMontagu
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2004-05-18 13:19:22]
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Re: Do i really know you.?
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by shorty_52 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:23:51 PM AEST
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good poem. i'm not sure if i'd call it dark poetry, but it's good nun the less. thanx for the good read.
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Re: Do i really know you.?
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:44:27 PM AEST
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man, secrets kill sometimes... i like the analogies you used, it's interesting.... ;0)
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Re: Do i really know you.?
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by Jaded-Sunrise on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:32:48 PM AEST
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