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The Treasure That I Should Find
Contributed by
swiftsouljah
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:04:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It seems like
Everyone profits
From my struggle
My Beautiful
She still has a best friend
My crew
They still got a homie
My parents
They still got a son
What about me
I ain’t got a numba one
It seems like
Somewhere in the struggle
I left myself behind
Somewhere in my search
I lost the treasure
That I should try to find
How can I help
Someone else
When I don’t know
Who I am
How can I smile
And live another day
When livin
Starts the killin
And I already know
That death
Is only the beginning
Of the struggles
That await me
Cause
What do I got
After I give
My heart away
What’s left
Heartbreak
Then what’s next
Sitting all alone
As isolation sets in
Comfortable loneliness
As I wait
For the pain to begin
As I witness
Myself wasting away
Hoping and wishing
Praying for a better day
All because
It my first time to fall
And my last time to love
Trying to give a girl
Myself
And not lose it all
Wondering if
A girl will ever think
That I’ll someday
Be worth it
Doubting that
There’s a girl
That could live with me
And together we’ll be perfect
Who could take this love
And help my life be
All I could ever dream
Who would love me
No matter what I do
That can’t wait to make
One heart of two
A girl that could see
My worth within
A girl that can
Leave my past behind
And handle who I became
The girl that walks with me
In God’s master plan
Yes, thats the treasure
That I should try to find
© Wayne Wende
Copyright ©
swiftsouljah
... [
2004-05-18 12:04:58]
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Re: The Treasure That I Should Find
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by aaaka on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:19:09 PM AEST
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| Questions we all ask. Answers we all want to find. Good writing. |
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Re: The Treasure That I Should Find
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by shorty_52 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:35:58 PM AEST
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don't worry. u'll find that gurl sumday and when u do treat her right and she won't try to break your heart! good poem and keep up the good work!
~allyson~ |
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Re: The Treasure That I Should Find
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:03:31 PM AEST
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'It seems like
Everyone profits
From my struggle'
enjoyed the start to this poem made me wanna read more... enjoyed the read too - well done mate...
feel free to comment on any of my poems
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Re: The Treasure That I Should Find
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by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 07:20:02 AM AEST
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Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing! Although it was sad, it was very well written. I hope you find who you're looking for. Best of luck!
Katie |
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Re: The Treasure That I Should Find
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by DirtyFool on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 12:06:04 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem. you know how to write poems that come from your heart. this poem is very well written. keep up the good work |
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