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The Game
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:01:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You’re playing me
(I’m letting you)
You’ve got me on a string
I’m dancing and you know it
To whatever song you sing
You’re twisting it
(I’m bending woo)
You’re making me insane
I’m wobbling and you see it
It’s nothing but a game
You’re screaming now
(I’m yelling too)
You’ve got a thing to learn
I’m laughing and you missed it
Dare it then to burn
Copyright ©
Silent-No-More
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2004-05-18 12:01:59]
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Re: The Game
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by aaaka on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:10:38 PM AEST
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| Tell it like it is . We have all been there at one time or another.Great! |
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Re: The Game
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 06:33:09 PM AEST
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| i feel what you saying here. sometimes being a puppet, atleast gets you their attention....great poem i like the inner thought additions |
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Re: The Game
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 12:02:31 PM AEST
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| Looks like it takes a lot to make you angry, but we can all only take so much! |
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Re: The Game
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:58:02 AM AEST
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Bloody Brilliant! I think that this is one of the best, in this topic, that I've read so far. So emotional and is, as always, written to perfection.
Take Care
-Becca
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Re: The Game
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 09:42:52 AM AEST
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I'd say up until today I couldn't even imagine you angry but you certainly captured it in this one.
"Dare it then to burn"
I love that closing line! ! ! !
Thanks,
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Re: The Game
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by ButchHoward on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 12:12:56 PM AEST
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Some games are fun. This one is not. I feel an intense sense of anger and defiance eminating from the page. I would characterise this poem as a verbal purcupine. Beware!
Butch |
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