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I am woman
Contributed by
aaaka
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 11:48:09 AM in AEST
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My beauty is undeniable
My smooth skin procrastinates with time
like the vintage of a fine wine
I give off radiant vibes like never before seen
spiritual as a goddess, graceful as a queen
My strength passes through bloodlines
sweeping like the wind
generation after generation time and again
I am an element that keeps lives in line
I am what makes family entwine
I am the bridge that closes gaps
I am longitude and latitude of life's map
I am as pure as water from the open seas
annointed to do as God appointed me
Helpmate to man's unfolding world
My wisdom dissolves the term lady and girl
I AM WOMAN
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aaaka
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2004-05-18 11:48:09]
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Re: I am woman
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:30:48 PM AEST
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| Your title and first few lines made me think of Maya Angelo's "Phenomenal Woman". Given that, you had a some big shoes to fill. You did so nicely! I'm impressed. : ) |
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Re: I am woman
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:36:26 PM AEST
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| wow this is an incredible poem. it's a powerful statement |
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Re: I am woman
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by shorty_52 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:42:04 PM AEST
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this poem was very good, and probally very true in most cases. keep up the good work!
~allyson~ |
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Re: I am woman
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:15:23 PM AEST
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'i am longitude and latitude of life's map'
nice line very jealous!! lol... really enjoyed the read i thought it was very very provoking - will read more...
feel free to comment on any of my poems... |
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Re: I am woman
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 01:10:20 PM AEST
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| You made me proud to be a woman. You said things here that needed to be said. wow... |
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Re: I am woman
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 04:43:21 AM AEST
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| Another well written poem keep using that gift you have. |
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