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Your Beast Within
Contributed by
Lia
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Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 08:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Surrounding your heart is a glowing aura of gold
It pierces my skin like push pins through paper
The ravenous beast inside your soul
Paces the floors inside it's cell you've created
Clicking heels against the barren ground
Echoing through the cold metal bars
Your tear stained pillow on which you lay your head
Is flatly shaped from the constant pounding of your fists
The frustration and confusion corrupts your mind
The agony you feel bleeds through your pores
I've offered you my hand a time or two
Only to have my compassion shoved over a cliff
If not for the trees to break my fall
Your breathe of fire would have crushed me
How long can you carry on your facade
To keep your prison sealed
Your burdened beast is hidden deep
Your crystal eyes prevail
You wipe your stinging tears too fast for us to see
In the midst of us you play your part with ease
I've listened to your silent screams
I've felt your sweet carress
I've pushed your limits to their edge
I've kissed your crimson lips
You've unleased your beast into my life
I'll shoot it's presence dead
I'll force your hand into mine own
I'll break the beast that binds you
And when he leaves the jail to scorn me
I'll shut the door behind him
Copyright ©
Lia
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2002-10-09 08:15:00]
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Re: Your Beast Within
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by aernby on
Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 08:47:48 AM AEST
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and you've been worried about block --- this good
I've been there, both places
you poem resonates with me
aern+ |
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Re: Your Beast Within
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 12:38:14 PM AEST
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| Lia, this is REALLY good. Bill sent me here - I am just as much in awe of your talent as he is. Keep up the great work :) -Karen |
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Re: Your Beast Within
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by nebill on
Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 12:55:50 PM AEST
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| Some of the most moving words I have read. It leaves me speachless, and that doesn't happen often! |
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Re: Your Beast Within
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 01:32:13 PM AEST
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| Lia, where are you today, what a grabbing write, this was good, (but, who's the beast, I've been reading the forums) ha, ha, |
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Re: Your Beast Within
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by WordPoet on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 03:40:59 AM AEST
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A beast by day,
A terror by night,
You'll have to pay,
What an awful fright.
Don't ask... Your poem is gripping, artistic, emotionally inspiring and just a itsy bitsy damn scary. Love it..... Keep up the good work.
(This is about a person and not about your linolium right?) |
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Re: Your Beast Within
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by Lia on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 05:00:30 AM AEST
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| LMAO...I was doing just fine until I read the last line in your comment...busted right up lmao!!! |
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Re: Your Beast Within
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 05:35:30 AM AEST
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Lia this is fantastic!!! Where did this come from? Never mind, I won't ask... but this is GREAT!!!! Keep up the great writing girl!!!
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