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to my father
Contributed by
taintedmind
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:48:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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dad you said you loved me
although i never saw it in your eyes
dad you said you loved me
even though you tried to ruin my life
eddie you said you loved me
because you yelled at me
eddie you said you loved me
although you never wiped my tears
mom why did you put up with him
dad why do you have to hate me
put me behind
you broke me you broke my life
dad ihate you
but why shouldnt i
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2004-05-18 10:48:38]
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Re: to my father
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by krisseee on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:51:40 AM AEST
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| great stuff |
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Re: to my father
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by Always on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 03:26:29 PM AEST
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| Brutal man, anywhere close to reality and that sux brother. But great Vent. |
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Re: to my father
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:46:38 AM AEST
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This was filled with so much anger.. i liked it.. great poem
christina |
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