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MY SUICIDE
Contributed by
taintedmind
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:00:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
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death awaits me at my word
i could die without being heard
i stand in the corner as i wait to hear
the words that come as they see there fear
as they run into the room and find me dead
then they wonder what they could have done instead
i frown as i wait to die lifeless and gone
i wonder if they know they are not alone
they think im dead but alive as i am
there is no hope for me i am damned
i feel my last breaths feel my lungs
then they say i really must have stung
the pain from the blade didn't hurt my neck
it relieved a side of me you never see
i died with a smile
you let me die with a frown
but now you can wear the thorns of my crown
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taintedmind
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2004-05-18 10:00:31]
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Re: MY SUICIDE
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by krisseee on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 11:09:00 AM AEST
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Re: MY SUICIDE
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:40:28 AM AEST
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This was excellent.. I loved the last line it was brillant.. I can relate and it is hard.. Great write..
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