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Devastation

Contributed by chong1 on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:34:06 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Devastation

I think of a little boy
Who was promised a game
Then i think of the devastation
And who is there to blame

I think of a little girl
Who is planning to be wed
Then I think of the devastation
And a loved one who is dead

I think of a mother
Waving good-bye at the door
Then i think of the devastation
And know one to be proud of anymore

I think of the little girl
kissing her father with a smile
Then i think of the devastation
He'll never walk me down the asile

I think of all the loved ones
Who left for work today
Then i think of the devastation
Be with them lord i pary

I think of how ours lives have changed
In one second or a blink
Then i think of the devastation
I just don't want to think

Copyright © chong1 ... [ 2004-05-18 09:34:06]
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Re: Devastation (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:36:44 PM AEST
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great poem,i think u should keep a limit to how many times u "think about the devastation".i'm ur friend i know what happened so i'm not gonna say anything bad,i wouldn't even if i hated u cuz it seriously was a well done poem and i know what ur going through.

PS.the next time u and lindsay go out u might wanna come home a bit earlier,u woke me up,and quit fighting with jamie so much

ur homie
cheech
(sherry-lynn)

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