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I Promise
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:11:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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What is this state of mind,
Confusion everywhere,
Misplaced emotion that should realy be eroding
But I do it everytime to myself and others too
The best I mest, to the rest I'm there like I realy do care
But all I should do is detest
So its got to stop, its got to end
Of this you must depend
You must be sure, I will be pure
So it will stop & it will end
And I will be a friend
Copyright ©
SweetRhythm
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2004-05-18 08:11:15]
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Re: I Promise
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:21:38 AM AEST
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Good write, an interesting poem.
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Re: I Promise
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:02:28 PM AEST
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Well BRAVO. You have learned one of the most important lessons in life! That seems to be a difficult lesson for so many people. It is as simple as if you take the time to do it, do it to the very best of your ability ot the time is just wasted. Friends are too valuable to give only a weak occasional try. True friends are gems and priceless.
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Re: I Promise
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:53:24 PM AEST
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great message:) hugs n' love nessa
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