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Wasted Cause
Contributed by
jt
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:10:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The tear falls
Noone sees the hurt inside
Mixes with the rain
Cant forgive the ones who lied
A flower dies
Noone knows the pain held in
Turns to dust
Burden of a life long sin
A grown man cries
The pressure is too great to stay
Hides his face
He gets up slow then turns away
A sane man cracks
Its time to let the hate escape
He breaks down
Tried to leave but its too late
Copyright ©
jt
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2004-05-18 08:10:01]
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Re: Wasted Cause
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by Princesaazul16 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:17:15 AM AEST
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| Good write! I liked this a lot! Keep up the good work. ~Stace~ |
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Re: Wasted Cause
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:47:37 AM AEST
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Good work! Sometimes you must follow a hard road, no matter if you want to or not!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Wasted Cause
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:53:10 AM AEST
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Yes, some very interesting concepts here.
Stitch |
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Re: Wasted Cause
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by tamilyn on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:10:08 PM AEST
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| I like the flow of this. tamilyn |
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