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Meant
Contributed by
Al_obotomize
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:21:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In dreams, i prey for your touch
any other time
i hate you so much
i've given my love
for you to own
you just don't care
you left it alone
i cry to you
you don't help at all
you cry to me
to your feet i fall
trying so hard
to help you through
if i were depressed
is that what you'd do?
treat me with love and be there for me
try like i try
when your problems sink deep
so deep that the love...physically hurts
i think that it's time
for our loves rebirth
the same way it was
when we first met
timid and innocent
the way we were meant
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Al_obotomize
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2004-05-18 04:21:55]
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Re: Meant
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:56:04 AM AEST
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This is a five star poem if ever I saw one. And i'm only the fourth person to read it . . . I hope many more will follow.
"if i were depressed
is that what you'd do?"
Great perspective employed to exposit the frustration.
A very enjoyable read. Well done. |
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Re: Meant
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by Princesaazul16 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:27:37 AM AEST
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| Wow, You did a great job writting this poem. I loved it. Keep up the good work! ~Stace~ |
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