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Baby's Breath
Contributed by
SeanMcHaney
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:33:30 AM in AEST
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No one told me she would die today,
I turn my face up to the sky.
I choke up as I try to say,
So instead I choose to cry!
God has chosen to take her life away,
I wish it was me who did die.
I need to find another way,
My life is one big lie!
Sitting in the aftermath,
Listening to the children laugh,
The soldier’s death,
No baby’s breath,
Broken Hearted I am alone!
No one told me I’d go insane today,
Rain falls down from the sky.
I wake up wishing it was yesterday,
Maybe then she would not die!
Sean McHaney
18/May/2K4
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2004-05-18 02:33:30]
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Re: Baby's Breath
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:36:16 AM AEST
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| Wow, I thought that was amazing. Good work. |
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Re: Baby's Breath
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:03:06 AM AEST
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| Exquisite and captivating. venkat |
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Re: Baby's Breath
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by Chrissylee on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:16:24 AM AEST
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| very sad write, if this did happen i hope joy comes again into your life soon |
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Re: Baby's Breath
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:16:26 AM AEST
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| this is depressing man. what inspired it? |
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Re: Baby's Breath
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:25:22 AM AEST
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Wow this is brilliant, well written beautiful and sad...Great work.
Hugs 'n Love
- Becca |
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Re: Baby's Breath
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by Princesaazul16 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 08:31:26 AM AEST
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Wow, nice job. Keep up the good work. Hope to hear more. I loved it!
~Stace~ |
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Re: Baby's Breath
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by Archie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 03:44:46 PM AEST
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| This is a very astounding poem. How we face death determines in part what type of people we are. You are an upright man in my sight and that is saying alot. |
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