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Screw Up
Contributed by
BaByBaNaNa
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:58:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Once again, I’ve done something wrong
Now another boy wants me gone
I wish I knew how to do things right
Then I wouldn’t be sitting here alone on this cold, lonely night
But I’ll get him back, I’ll make him mine
I’ll do whatever I have to do, I’ll beg, plead, and whine
Cause he means a lot to me
It just took this for me to see
I really do care
I really do want him there
He told me I flirted with Pwagen and Zack
Then he said, “I want me ***** back!”
Right then I was thinking, “Oh my god! This is the end!”
At least he didn’t use that stupid line “I still want to be your friend”
He didn’t say anything for awhile
I wanted to make him laugh, at least smile
But I couldn’t, at this point, he hated me
I was my face he didn’t want to see
It was me he despised
It was me who told him lies
I hurt that boy
More than a little boy crashes his toys
I want to tell that boy how sorry I am
I want to let him know how lucky I am to have him as my man
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BaByBaNaNa
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2004-05-17 22:58:37]
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Re: Screw Up
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:03:11 AM AEST
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| This is really good! If i could give u some advice, dont put "leave comments" in the message, that turns too many people off! But great job! |
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Re: Screw Up
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by Black13 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:59:44 AM AEST
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Good write.
Powerful.
Nice job.
Hope it works out for you in the end. |
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Re: Screw Up
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by kittie30 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:33:27 AM AEST
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| i am sorry you and him are like that i hope things work out for ya Great Write |
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Re: Screw Up
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 09:54:25 PM AEST
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| I think you need to let him know what you're feeling so at least he know. |
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