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Lost the Lottery?
Contributed by
Jaded-Sunrise
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:35:04 PM in AEST
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Poised and Primp she'll never be
and she hates stupidity
She shows bad judgement as she slits her wrist...
for all the moments she has missed
Blood doesn't come out
No only her brain
That one little organ thats made her insane
Now that it's all gone eveythings okay
But there goes truth getting in her way
She won't fight back
No she'll run and hide
As she waits for an easy ride
NO! The truth will not se her free
Cause then you'd know "who she be"
She must hide the past and fix tomorrow
Because then she'd have no days filled with sorrow
Or maybe she would and should just learn to cope
Maybe she should find the real meaning of hope
So she'll get a grip and get rid of her sinful pride
No she won't need that for this long ride
All she needs is to been "saved" by her lord
That is something even the homeless can afford....
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Re: Lost the Lottery?
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by morelikelyrics on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:55:56 PM AEST
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well... quite surprised to be the first to comment...
very structurely sound and flowing...
but more importantly, this write was very touching.... and it tells a tragic story, with a moving and inspirational, yet thoughtful attitude...
very well done... welcome to YPDC... |
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Re: Lost the Lottery?
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:20:44 AM AEST
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Good solid poem. I enjoyed my read. top marks
bernard. |
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