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Rules And People Were Made To Be Broken
Contributed by
ShadowDaughter
on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:20:53 PM in AEST
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Hello, and thank you for opening this brochure!
If you have picked up
this simple guide
to making your life
a better, happier place,
congratulations!
you have taken the first step
to life-improvement
within this simple
and easily understandable
brochure,
we shall endeavor to show you
how to better your life.
all you need to do
is keep five small thoughts in mind.
thought number one:
rules were made to be broken
(follow none.
make none.
ever.)
thought number two:
wings were made to be broken
(never try to glide.
never try to soar.
ever.)
thought number three:
dreams were made to be broken
(dare not hope.
dare not wish.
ever.)
thought number four:
trust was made to be broken
(do not let yourself trust.
do not let yourself be trusted.
ever.)
people were made to be broken
(do not try to be a person.
do not let yourself get broken.
ever.)
Thank you, and have a nice day!
Copyright ©
ShadowDaughter
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2004-05-17 21:20:53]
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Re: Rules And People Were Made To Be Broken
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:23:53 PM AEST
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| This is really good! I hope things begin to look up hon! You got a great talent! |
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Re: Rules And People Were Made To Be Broken
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:25:13 PM AEST
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Meh! Screwed up on the last bit . . . it was supposed to be:
thought number five:
people were made to be broken
(do not try to be a person.
do not let yourself get broken.
ever.)
Thank you, and have a nice day!
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Sorry 'bout that. |
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Re: Rules And People Were Made To Be Broken
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:31:11 PM AEST
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| I hope things are ok. Are they? This was a different write. I believe every single word of it. It's sad really. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Rules And People Were Made To Be Broken
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:38:37 PM AEST
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| Creative. Depressing. An interesting read! |
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Re: Rules And People Were Made To Be Broken
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by shelby on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:35:47 PM AEST
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interesting write and concept loved the style with this
Michelle |
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Re: Rules And People Were Made To Be Broken
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by blueheart on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 11:16:09 PM AEST
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| I could really identify with thought number four. Heck, I could relate to the whole poem. I loved this poem to bits. Exceptional write. You've outdone yourself with this one. :) |
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Re: Rules And People Were Made To Be Broken
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by brigitte7735 on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 11:20:40 PM AEST
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You have got the most unique style, i am so in love.
Vanessa |
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Re: Rules And People Were Made To Be Broken
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:52:57 AM AEST
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Damn... I love this. It's so true. Awesome job!
~ Dee |
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Re: Rules And People Were Made To Be Broken
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by Black13 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:53:48 AM AEST
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Wow...
This was powerful and I agree with you very depressing.
I guess I'll just have to risk myself to these atrocities though.
:) |
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Re: Rules And People Were Made To Be Broken
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:58:58 AM AEST
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Very nice poem, albeit on a downer.
I think you've done a great job here.
Well done. |
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Re: Rules And People Were Made To Be Broken
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:45:40 PM AEST
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This comes to the heart of the matter beautifully, but it serves to help us choose the other road... the one it advises against. But I agree, things would be so much easier sometimes to think like this brochure. It would take the light out of life, though.
Great job!
Andrew |
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Re: Rules And People Were Made To Be Broken
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:39:41 PM AEST
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A truly painful, yet intriguing write.. good stuff..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Rules And People Were Made To Be Broken
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by Cancer on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 11:26:04 PM AEST
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sh*t. i almost hate you for thinking of this first. this is brilliant.
"thought number three:
dreams were made to be broken
(dare not hope.
dare not wish.
ever.)"
even UFYPMOTGF don't cover this. damn you.
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