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'''' Rain ''''
Contributed by
Cynthia
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 08:55:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Pitter on my heart
patter against my window
the rain always falls.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
May.15/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-05-17 20:55:31]
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Re: '''' Rain ''''
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by arden on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 08:57:46 PM AEST
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this is kinda sad.
nicely done.
Arden |
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Re: '''' Rain ''''
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:32:35 PM AEST
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Oooooh, nice . . . sad, like Becky said, but quite powerful (for all its succinct simplicity), vivid, and definitely a pleasure to read. Keep 'em coming, Cynthia!
--Nora |
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Re: '''' Rain ''''
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by morelikelyrics on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:46:18 PM AEST
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yes, beautiful but with a hint of despair...
hopeful, yet futile.... like magic...
seems that i am mumbling... only due to the lack of what little words there are to describe this short and simple, yet meaningful poem...
always a pleasure to read your writes...
~Morelikelyrics |
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Re: '''' Rain ''''
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:24:34 PM AEST
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ooooo! i love rain and i adore this haiku, exquisite as ever, cynthia, huggies n' love nessa
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Re: '''' Rain ''''
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:31:00 PM AEST
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Short and simple and to the point... Good write...
~Donna~ |
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Re: '''' Rain ''''
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by shelby on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:33:01 PM AEST
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lovely yet touched with sadness u ok??
Michelle |
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Re: '''' Rain ''''
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:52:17 PM AEST
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Cynthia dear friend, how you be?
You've had much rain fall in your life lately.
But your Hiaku is lovely......I love Haiku's
I'll be anxious to see
just how you and everyone at your house seem to be
love you
consue |
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Re: '''' Rain ''''
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by blueheart on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:58:25 PM AEST
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You definitely are the haiku queen. :)
Sad write. |
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Re: '''' Rain ''''
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:14:58 AM AEST
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| Very good haiku..venkat |
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Re: '''' Rain ''''
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:50:18 AM AEST
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Sweet haiku..drops in gently....
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: '''' Rain ''''
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:42:30 AM AEST
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As most know, I love the rain and this poem, though it may mean sadness to you, means relief to me. Such a short phrasing and yet so full of meaning.
Brilliant.
Bravo! Encore!
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: '''' Rain ''''
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by emystar on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:22:17 PM AEST
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Sounds like u live in Washinton State.
I did awhile and it's true it rains 9 months out of the year.
I'm home in Arkansas where it rains just enuff.
I luv the rain at home and I luv this write.
U said so much with little words.
Luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: '''' Rain ''''
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:44:47 PM AEST
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I will be so glad when you come back. I miss you so much. I have a lot of "rain" right now.
Love,
Rita |
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