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Two Worlds
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 07:05:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Proffesional to a fault
Cordial – not quite cold
The Occasional wink makes me halt
Then focus and responsibility take hold
His hand touches me softly
My breath catches in my throat
He removes it gently
I suddenly feel remote
Of his feelings, I’m not sure
Of his caring, there’s no doubt
But in his heart, is there more
Will I ever find out?
When the day is through
His charm and wit return
He warms my heart anew
Burning away my concern
It’s safe to flirt once more
His teasing drives me wild
For him, I yearn to my core
I am utterly beguiled
Away, all doubt has flown
He makes his feelings clear
Passion is heard in his tone
With no other, have I been this near
It’s as if the world had split
One had become two
From one, two now sit
Two of me and two of you
In one the mind resides
And the other keeps the heart
Which world decides
Where to end or where to start?
One day I hope to find
A way to reunite
The worlds of heart and mind
To end their lonely plight
Copyright ©
ToriVeigh
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2004-05-17 19:05:01]
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Re: Two Worlds
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by Joan on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 07:37:32 PM AEST
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| keep working and maybe life will take your dream into reality...if you want to find love, you will...even if you don't it may be fun to imagine the dream...good poem.. |
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Re: Two Worlds
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:20:20 PM AEST
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You are a great writer...this is just soo...perfect. I am not really any good at commenting on poems because I can never manage to say what i want to but this was fantastic
Great Write and I look forward to more
Take Care
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