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Bloodthirsty Sleep
Contributed by
Bloodthirsty
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 04:54:27 PM in AEST
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I want to fall asleep
And never wake up
There is no tomorrow
For me
Only here and now
Holding my way out
Of my pain
In my hands
Thriving on this rusted blade
Not wanting to let go
Not for anyone
Even though I pretend
To be trying to end it
I know deep down that.....
The nighmare has just begun
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Bloodthirsty
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2004-05-17 16:54:27]
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Re: Bloodthirsty Sleep
(User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 05:32:37 PM AEST
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| very sad write but i enjoyed the flow |
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Re: Bloodthirsty Sleep
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 05:57:12 PM AEST
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Extremely flowing confessions of sheer tribulations. Great, expressive write.
Bravo and encore
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: Bloodthirsty Sleep
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:09:28 AM AEST
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great great
bravo |
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