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Killer Love
Contributed by
Bloodthirsty
on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 04:36:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I hold the knife in my hands
Staring at blood spattered walls
Wondering what my next move will be
How soon will they be coming for me?
I stare at the lifeless body
Of a girl i hardly knew
But she had to die
She was going to run away with you
It was all a lie!!!
When you said I was the only one
Right then and there
I should have grabbed a gun
And put it to your head
But soon enough you'll be dead
You can join your other lover
In eternal slumber
Then I will be able to sleep at night
Knowing the two of you
Are six feet under
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Bloodthirsty
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2004-05-17 16:36:42]
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Re: Killer Love
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 04:46:01 PM AEST
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MORBIDLY GRIPPING
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Re: Killer Love
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by shorty_52 on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 05:39:00 PM AEST
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this is so good! u grabbed my attention imediatly. it's kinda creepy but it is really good. keep up the good work!
~allyson~ |
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Re: Killer Love
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by Saitou-sama on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:17:14 PM AEST
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| It really drags you in. Great write. |
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