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A Good Friendship
Contributed by
monkey
on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 04:26:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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a good friendship,
just like food,
needs all of its ingredients
for if even one
is missing
the mouth-watering chocolate desert
you worked so hard to make
may appear sweet
but is actually very bitter
put together the ingredients that follow
so your friends hearts arent hollow
trust,
for the days I tell you secrets.
honesty,
for the days I need your opinion.
loyalty,
for the days I feel betrayed.
care,
for the days I fall and need help getting up.
a phone number, only i am aware of,
for the days and nights I feel ignored
love,
for the days I feel no one cares.
humor,
for the days I need a laugh.
intelligence,
for the days I need help with my homework.
a smile,
for the days my heart feels frozen.
a shoulder,
for the days I need to cry.
and a recollective mind,
for the days we need to remember happier times.
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Copyright ©
monkey
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2004-05-17 16:26:01]
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Re: A Good Friendship
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 04:34:01 PM AEST
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This is so very true.....wonderful write..
Welcome to YPDC...
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Re: A Good Friendship
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:19:26 PM AEST
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Absolute essentials. Fantastic write.
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Re: A Good Friendship
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by whisper-of-night on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:46:11 PM AEST
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| Exactly! EXACTLY!!! You could not had described it in a better way! That is why a REAL friend and a TRUE friendship is hard to find, but you know, just keep your eyes open, who knows, he/she may be just right beside you!(*wink*)^_^ |
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