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Painful Blade
Contributed by
blossomingcherry5353
on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:57:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The pain,
She can not take it anymore,
Running from her fears,
People chasing her with hateful words,
In her palm,
The knife,
The blade,
To end her connection to the world,
She grasps it,
Holding it high in the air,
Watching the world slowly move by,
She begins to see the beauty in the world,
All she cares about is ridding her of this
horrible pain,
ALL OF THIS PAIN,
ALL THIS EMOTION,
ALL THIS SUFFERING,
FOR WHAT,
WHY CONTINUE?,
She puts the cold blade to her neck,
Aware of her intentions,
She begins to slice,
Feeling finaly at rest,
Collapsing to the ground,
With a smile upon her face.
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blossomingcherry5353
... [
2004-05-17 15:57:41]
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Re: Painful Blade
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by Katie2008 on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 04:29:28 PM AEST
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| I like this poem a lot. It's sad to think how many people actually go through that. |
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Re: Painful Blade
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by Archie on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 06:42:53 PM AEST
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| I hope you let something else bring you joy instead of pain and suffering. Death is not as easy a way out as you think, it is a dead end. |
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Re: Painful Blade
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by polishkiss on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 12:35:00 AM AEST
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| this poem really spoke to me alot. u have managed to capture exactly how i fell at times. |
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