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IN A WORLD OF YOU
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:53:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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In a world of you
I am alone
Avoiding the truth
By staying stoned
I run to try to get away
But the faster I run
The closer I stay
I stand alone
In a world of you
Thinking wildly
Debating what to do
Frightened by these visions
Floating through the air
Trying desperately
To escape your stare
You leave me abandoned
IN A WORLD OF YOU
Running around
Avoiding truth
Copyright ©
PRECIOUSBECKY
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2004-05-17 15:53:33]
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Re: IN A WORLD OF YOU
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by reilt on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 04:12:51 PM AEST
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| brilliant poem...sad but wonderfully written |
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Re: IN A WORLD OF YOU
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:04:15 AM AEST
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Nice write & enjoyable easy read though deep and meaningful im sure to you. Thanks for sharing.
Corinna |
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Re: IN A WORLD OF YOU
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by priss on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 02:26:19 PM AEST
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| good poem... it is a scary feeling to be with someone and still feel alone. |
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Re: IN A WORLD OF YOU
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by Lilbabe on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 06:22:08 PM AEST
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| i know how this feels... i felt it several times & it hurts badly just hang on & u'll make it through |
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