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Couple Words
Contributed by
lil_angel
on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:29:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Couple words here
A broken heart there
Will this heart ever mend?
Crying inside and out
Will he ever love me?
I don’t know
But I don’t want his sarcastic apology
Or his “love” it is fake
The inner scars never heal
A couple words here and there
A smashed self-image
Now it is time to go to some one who really loves me
Sweet Jesus hold me
Save me
Comfort me
Calm me
Help me
Take away my pain
September 24th 1998
Copyright ©
lil_angel
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2004-05-17 15:29:45]
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Re: Couple Words
(User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:40:48 PM AEST
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| Wow, that's really awesome. It really speaks to people who go through the same thing. I hope whoever you wrote it about got a chance to read it. Great writing! |
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Re: Couple Words
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by DragonLuvSong on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:44:06 AM AEST
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| it sounds like a real cry for help, which is what it is seeing the description you wrote. i like it. |
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