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All goes quiet
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:21:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The house goes quiet
Except for the weeping of a broken heart
A drunk passes out
Now the fear floats away
The smile creeps back on a face
I still say in my room
I can read my bible with no fear
But instead pray
I hid in my quiet place
Visit with God
Lord hear my prayer
Help me understand
Hug me
Take me
Stay with me until the pain goes away
Help me love him
But his love hurts
I don’t want it
Or need it
Please lord
September 27TH 1998
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lil_angel
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2004-05-17 15:21:06]
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Re: All goes quiet
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by Katie2008 on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:44:20 PM AEST
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| This piece was really well written but very sad. |
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Re: All goes quiet
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 04:05:32 PM AEST
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| I've just posted "Father" today.... and was taken aback by how similar your write was in places. I understand "all goes quiet".... I used "numb and silent" throughout my peice. It struck a cord. Very good write! |
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Re: All goes quiet
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:19:01 PM AEST
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| This is such a sad, heartfelt write. I am so sorry to hear about you going through this pain. *hugs* *S* Cynthia |
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