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Paper
Contributed by
Dying_angel_2
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:16:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Stop and think
Walk on and ponder the thought
Pause to gather them up
Written down
They seem to drown
The paper in black
Once down Never back
Tippex may cover it up
But it can never be undone
So think before you act
'Cos there ain't no going back..
Copyright ©
Dying_angel_2
... [
2004-05-17 15:16:27]
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Re: Paper
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:25:10 PM AEST
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| This is really good! Wonderfully done! |
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Re: Paper
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by reilt on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:32:04 PM AEST
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| really good. i liked it a lot |
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Re: Paper
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:15:13 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. nice metaphor |
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Re: Paper
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by Another_Dimension on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 05:32:04 PM AEST
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I liked this
nicely done
4/5
BS x |
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