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Without
Contributed by
Luinil
on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:09:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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life without sight
faith without reason
pain without tears
fight without end
sleep without peace
bleed without pain
feel without breath
scream without sound
cry without love
crawl without earth
breathe without you
earth without me
die without.
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Luinil
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2004-05-17 15:09:56]
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Re: Without
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:12:55 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net....
This is a lovely concept...Like your style..
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Re: Without
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by Dying_angel_2 on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:18:41 PM AEST
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| I like this a lot carry on this is good work.. |
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Re: Without
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by reilt on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:33:37 PM AEST
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| this is great...i really liked it...welcome* |
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Re: Without
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by Merry on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 06:10:23 PM AEST
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welcome to this wild and crazy place. Your poem is full of deep feelings - nicely written - keep up the good work
smiles
merry |
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