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The Sadness Closing In..
Contributed by
Dying_Angel
on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 02:48:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Sit down
And listen
Do you hear that?
The sadness closing in..
Stand up
And feel
Do you sense that?
The sadness closing in..
Walk around
And inhale
Do you taste that?
The sadness closing in..
Stop
And look
Do you see that?
The sadness closing in..
Hear A Girl Weeping
Feel The Cold Of His Heart
Taste The Alchohol On His Clothes
See The Red Of Her Blood Running Down Her Arm
Hear
Feel
Taste
See
The sadness closing in..
Copyright ©
Dying_Angel
... [
2004-05-17 14:48:09]
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Re: The Sadness Closing In..
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by purplestary on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 02:52:44 PM AEST
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| great write |
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Re: The Sadness Closing In..
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by Mortis-Dark on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:04:18 PM AEST
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This poem is very good. I like how you sowed the sensory words into the piece that gives it that uplifting feeling. Great Write :D
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Re: The Sadness Closing In..
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:00:21 PM AEST
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Good write...
~Donna~ |
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