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feelings for her
Contributed by
kittie30
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 02:24:55 PM in AEST
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She walks further away as i try to get closer.
i feel sorry when she crys, happy when she laughs.
Cant say a word, breth held in, not very normal, all tightened up, mind going in cricles will not stop.
Dont have the guts to ask her out, can not talk, still i look out for her, i give her gifts make her laugh, still i cant get her off my mind as i try to get back to reality.
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Re: feelings for her
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by Mortis-Dark on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:01:54 PM AEST
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Ive been there a time or too. Just tell her how you feel. If theres really a connection there then things will work out. But dont wait and waste for ever. Theres always more fish in the sea. Great Write :D
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Re: feelings for her
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by Jaded-Sunrise on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 07:16:43 PM AEST
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| Another good one.Your poems get into your mind and your emotions so easily and flow so well. |
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Re: feelings for her
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by drummerchic18 on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 09:11:35 PM AEST
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| I've been reading your writing, and all I can say is you have pure talent. YOu have to go with your heart, you only live once, so why waste time? |
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