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let you go
Contributed by
kori31
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 02:21:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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It seems I've let you go
why you'll never know
and I'll never let you back
of all your lies I've kept good track
It's the part of you I despise
that I've seen in my own eyes
those things I want to change
inside you they will remain
this is my silent goodbye
though I know that you can't see
I let you go but not alone
you took a part of me
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kori31
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2004-05-17 14:21:48]
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Re: let you go
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:14:55 PM AEST
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| This is really good! You got a wonderful talent! |
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Re: let you go
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by reilt on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:46:14 PM AEST
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| excellent write |
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Re: let you go
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by Princesaazul16 on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:54:51 PM AEST
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| I know i can relate to this, and im sure other people can too. Good job! ~Stace~ |
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Re: let you go
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by fairy-of-ice on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 05:02:59 PM AEST
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| i loved this poem, its left me thinking that maybe i should take your advice...i can relate so well, well done! |
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