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Loves Garden
Contributed by
secretwind
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:30:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The essence of you
swirls around
in ah daze
with no control,
exsisting
in a beautiful world...
i melt for you
in loves garden i am waiting
come to me babe.
Visions and emotions
softly moan to me
whispers of love
play like music
in the background,
innervisions are overflowing
on fire with desire
in loves garden i am waiting
come to me babe.
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secretwind
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2004-05-17 12:30:01]
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Re: Loves Garden
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:08:28 PM AEST
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Wwwwwwwwhhhhhhhhhhheeeeewwww!
Oh my this write is hot. I can feel the flame...
uuuhhhh, now can't even speak, write or wat to **** was I trying to do? Oh yeah, definently passonate and on fire.
wow!
luv, huggs, smiles, flames,
emy
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Re: Loves Garden
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 12:04:29 AM AEST
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This was really lovely.... I'm sure it did melt someone's heart...
Jenni |
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