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forever forsaken
Contributed by
taintedmind
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 11:29:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Today as i walk in the shadow of souls
i see my own
i see my life
i see my suicide
tomorrow i get tired of this life
i see the blade
i see my blood
i see every thing dead
in the future i see my funeral
solomn and grey
i see my mom crying
and i return to today
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Re: forever forsaken
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:07:06 PM AEST
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SHORT-SIMPLE AND GREAT WRITE-
WHATEVER POSSESSES US TO HAVE SUCH MORBID THOUGHTS? I DONT KNOW BUT I TOTALLY RELATE |
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Re: forever forsaken
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:47:48 AM AEST
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This was excellent... it was short and simple and got the message you wanted across. Great write..
christina |
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Re: forever forsaken
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by Evanescencefreak on
Saturday, 11th June 2011 @ 10:11:39 AM AEST
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| Such a cool right, I didnt understand until the very last line, but then it works so well. |
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