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Plain Jane Doesn't Love You
Contributed by
ali
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:52:17 AM in AEST
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Ever since I've known you,
I've wanted to be with you,
I thought we'd never be,
But now there's something that I see.
I am no plain jane,
Most people doubt I'm sane,
But I'm not of my rocker,
I just love you.
Ditch that plain jane,
Don't fall for her again,
She's got nothing to offer,
She won't ever love you.
You are so unique,
You do things that make me laugh and shirek,
I see you with her,
I want to cry:
Ditch that plain jane,
Don't fall for her again,
She's got nothing to offer,
She won't ever love you.
You've got something good,
You've got something great,
You'd go so well with me,
We've both got personality.
I am no plain jane,
Most people doubt I'm sane,
But I'm not of my rocker,
I just love you.
Ditch that plain jane,
Don't fall for her again,
She's got nothing to offer,
She won't ever love you.
I've seen you watch me sing and dance,
I know you want to too,
So say goodbye to the Barbie doll,
And be with someone who loves you.
One day plain jane says "It's over
You are insane,
I've got a better offer,
and I could never love you"
Then you realise,
Then you see,
That all the time,
You loved me.
I am no plain jane,
Most people doubt I'm sane,
But I'm not of my rocker,
I just love you.
You got dropped by plain jane,
I reckon she's insane,
Cos now that I am with you,
I will never let you go.
Copyright ©
ali
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2004-05-17 10:52:17]
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Re: Plain Jane Doesn't Love You
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by purplestary on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 11:14:05 AM AEST
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good write..i loved these lines: "I've seen you watch me sing and dance,
I know you want to too,
So say goodbye to the Barbie doll,
And be with someone who loves you" |
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Re: Plain Jane Doesn't Love You
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by fairy-of-ice on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:54:20 PM AEST
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| its ok if this is either a song or a poem, its still great! i love the idea of plain jane and can relate to how you feel. great poem/song thing! |
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Re: Plain Jane Doesn't Love You
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by hisbeautifulnightmare on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 03:05:52 PM AEST
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| i like the flow of it. it's gone a nice rhyming scheme. about a song, i'm not sure. it's not quite lyrical enough. but i don't know that much. it's a really good peice of base work. nice job |
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