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Over
Contributed by
krazed_AnGeL101
on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:17:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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She walks through the halls waving and smiling
She seems so happy, but inside she's crying.
If you looked at her you'd see a beautiful, blue-eyed princess,
The captain of cheerleading, always so well-dressed.
She's never even drank, doesn't smoke cigarettes or weed,
Her life is so perfect, at least that's the way it seems.
But how many days or years will it all take to show,
It shouldn't be long now and then everyone will know.
The cuts and the bruises get so much bigger everyday,
At night her father rapes her, says it has to be that way.
Finally her day comes, the nightmare is over and done,
And she stands at his grave holding her newborn son.
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2004-05-17 10:17:13]
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Re: Over
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by purplestary on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 11:04:37 AM AEST
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| good write.. very sad..but good. |
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Re: Over
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:19:26 PM AEST
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SO SAD-
I HAVE AFRIEND THAT ACTUALLY HAD A CHILD BY HER FATHER-AND HE IS ALSO DECEASED NOW- REALY A TRAGIC STORY
GREAT WRITE |
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Re: Over
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by perfection on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:34:42 PM AEST
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OMG! I love it!
I have mixed emotions about it, its sad, its a great write, good show of detail, just all around great write!
Good Job!!
Sarah
PS. this isnt a true story for you is it? |
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