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Everything Changes...
Contributed by
reilt
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:54:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Everything changes
With the tide.
Holding her own
Against the current,
Strong.
But young boy...Be a buoy
Tonight
Just in case,
Sink or swim,
Everything changes
With a wave...
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-05-17 09:54:55]
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Re: Everything Changes...
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by Stitch on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:02:24 AM AEST
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Interesting. I love the brevity and how you make me curious for more.
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Re: Everything Changes...
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:23:53 PM AEST
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SO PERFECTLY WRITTEN
I LOVE IT
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Re: Everything Changes...
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by arden on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:40:39 PM AEST
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interesting yes but really well done.
awesome write, i enjoyed it.
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Re: Everything Changes...
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by emystar on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 07:58:18 PM AEST
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Another good write.
Everything definently changes.
luv, huggs,
emy
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