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A Thousand Roses
Contributed by
TheReturnOfx7
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:45:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Around the fence, a thousand roses in bloom
Just hope the thorns, don't come out of hiding too soon
Can't have her reaching out, just to prick her fingers
Even though the wounds heal, the pain always lingers
The bulbs have barely opened, just crawled out of nature's womb
Tiny little seeds she planted, surving the harshness of winter's tomb
Nurtured by the gentle touch, the silk that becomes her skin
Past the field of a thousand roses, a home for her to find within
Amongst the subtleness of dreams, I hope she'll find the way
Become more than just a vision, a reality to forever stay
A message inside a dream, almost too beautiful to be real
Providing me with just one more, heart that I must steal
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TheReturnOfx7
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2004-05-17 09:45:19]
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Re: A Thousand Roses
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by GeorgeJamesDelgado on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:55:19 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written; just beautiful! |
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Re: A Thousand Roses
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:11:28 AM AEST
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beautiful, flowing, and enchanting, jason, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A Thousand Roses
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:33:21 PM AEST
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Welcome home, Jase.... Lovely and romantic..as always....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: A Thousand Roses
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:34:43 PM AEST
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That's soooooo sweet! I hate to keep using the same word(s) in all my comments, lol, but this is truly beautiful. Just gorgeous.
~ Dee |
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Re: A Thousand Roses
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:12:30 PM AEST
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A beautiful... wonderful write... Keep it up...
~Donna~ |
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Re: A Thousand Roses
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:04:53 AM AEST
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Firstly can I just say "welcome back", if indeed your username is anything to go by.
Ok that was lovely realy nice & beautiful writen. Very enjoyable read. Look forward to seeing more submissions,
Corinna |
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Re: A Thousand Roses
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by gery_giggles on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:57:03 PM AEST
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wow...very beautiful..good imagery.
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