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Angry Young Man
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krisseee
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 08:31:45 AM in AEST
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Re: Angry Young Man
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 08:44:08 AM AEST
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*applauds*
'Kin great poem.
Although I get the feeling that it will be soon deleted, I have already made a copy of it, so that I can read it if it is . . .
Excellent exposition, as well as rhyme. I think the way you used 'curse, verse, worse and nurse was good, and was particularly good when you used 'stink, pink, chink and drink'. Using humour and characterisation, you've written a very emotive, rhythmic, offensive and in-your-face poem.
Which I like.
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Re: Angry Young Man
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by purplestary on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 08:45:10 AM AEST
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| great write!! |
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Re: Angry Young Man
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by pixie on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 11:57:19 AM AEST
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>>>>>>if you're offended by obscenities, you better skip this page,
....ah, ok, you're still with me, well now you're gonna feel my rage,
no truer words were ever spoken than "all the world's a stage"
i'm a performing escapologist, watch me bust out of this cage.
This is my fave part, loved it,
Great poem.
Pixie xxxx |
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