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Ocean divide
Contributed by
nomie
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 07:44:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I’ve had just one taste of you,
Just one touch of your skin,
One kiss of your lips,
A night that's long been,
One night without regret,
Leaving cravings for more,
That can’t be fulfilled,
As we stand on different shores,
This memory haunting me,
Thoughts of you filling my day,
Could have been so much more,
If you weren’t so far away,
Now I’m coming to see you again,
Excited yet also scared,
A short time yet again,
I feel so unprepared,
I’m already too far in,
Meeting you for an instant,
As you keep getting better,
My thoughts have become constant
I’ll let things take their course,
In fear of more hurt,
Putting my trust in fate,
My wellbeing shan’t revert,
May my feelings not grow too fast,
Let them stay trapped inside,
As we’ll be back to how we were,
Either side of an ocean divide
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2004-05-17 07:44:30]
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Re: Ocean divide
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by poetrygodslove on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 08:01:47 AM AEST
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What a beautiful poem.
saddens me as well for you to be so far apart.
hope things work out for both of you. sandy |
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Re: Ocean divide
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by Chrissylee on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 08:12:28 AM AEST
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| the love though far apart can only grow more stronger if it is truely meant to be.. i wish you all the best in your venture of love... great write you can feel the love surrounding you both |
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Re: Ocean divide
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 08:45:58 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem... thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Ocean divide
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by krisseee on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:02:49 AM AEST
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| felt that same pain for long time. Now, i'm living in her country. women!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't live with 'em, can't live with 'em :) |
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Re: Ocean divide
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:21:20 AM AEST
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beautiful poem from title to last word, these things do work out if both people have a genuine love for one another, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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