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The Mansion of Life
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:20:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I walk into a mansion
I close the door behind
I look at all the rooms around, not knowing what I'll find
Some rooms are filled with flowers
Others filled with cheer
Yet there is still a couple rooms that I would not dare go near
Some rooms are filled with sadness
Others are dark and gray
and yet there is other rooms that are filled with pure dismay
There is so many colors
That seem to touch my soul
The rooms that surround me just take a piece of me to hold
I dont know why I stayed there
Something seemed to lure me in
Perhaps it was the pleasant dreams and wishes that were hidden deep within
I could have easily left this place
I could have walked outside
Instead I went into a vibrant room
That seemed to blow my mind
Now although the mansion was filled with sadness, happiness, and cheer
Please remember fellows that there is a valuable lesson always near
Although there was sadness right before my eyes
I chose to shut the door and go into another room to hide
The room I chose to enter made me forget all of my fears
It took away my sadness, because the room was filled with cheer!
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JennyFruFru
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Re: The Mansion of Life
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by shelby on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:24:13 AM AEST
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thanks for this yes its true when one door closes three more opens to something better
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Re: The Mansion of Life
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by venkat on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:39:07 AM AEST
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| Yea..thats what I love to do..a good advice..a lovely poem..venkat |
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Re: The Mansion of Life
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:57:46 AM AEST
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sweet write jenny:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Mansion of Life
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by Stitch on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 08:13:19 AM AEST
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Perplexing and intriguing.
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Re: The Mansion of Life
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by bernard on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 08:26:23 AM AEST
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What a wonderful poem and yes there is always another door into another room, It is what one chooses. I think that is the secret to a happy life.
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Re: The Mansion of Life
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:02:25 AM AEST
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That just flowed along so well, excellent work.
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Re: The Mansion of Life
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 04:08:35 PM AEST
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Ah yes, life's choices. So glad you made the right one, Sweet Pea.
Lots of hugs,
Rita |
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Re: The Mansion of Life
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by arden on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 06:22:10 PM AEST
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wow.... i truely love this write.
so beautiful. the flow was so flawless. this has to be the best poem iv read today.
thank you for sharing.
well done.
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Re: The Mansion of Life
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 08:12:47 AM AEST
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Superb stuff..there is always more than meets the eye and more paths in life you can go in order to find happiness as long as you dare to look fore them and thread them!
Greetz,
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Re: The Mansion of Life
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 07:45:42 PM AEST
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Very Enjoyable Read Loved It Jenny :-) Also Quite Entertaining !!!!!!!!! Well Done G/F :-)
LoVe - AnGeL
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Re: The Mansion of Life
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 04:39:15 PM AEST
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very nice
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Re: The Mansion of Life
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by emystar on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:32:46 AM AEST
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A very good write.
Just like life there is always good and bad.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Mansion of Life
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 06:09:20 AM AEST
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Sadness and happiness brought together.
Very intresting read. It flowed so well. |
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