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Smile please..
Contributed by
venkat
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:11:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Love is the song of life
It gives a meaning to life
Love is the honey of time
It bestows longevity of life
If nobody comes to share us
Love the nature and its beauty
Love humanity or a deity
Love a pet or even a plant
Love the music or the poetry
If we learn to love others
They will come with open arms
Give and take is the rhythm
Of love to recharge our lives
Love fills a new spirit and
A new energy to live in happiness
If we laugh whole heartedly
We can feel health of our minds
Smiles will save our health
If love is associated by happiness
Not only mind’s health but also
Longevity of life becomes our wealth!
Copyright ©
venkat
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Re: Smile please..
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by shelby on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:17:47 AM AEST
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Venkat my friend your love and heart shines in each word beautiful
Michelle |
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by JennyFruFru on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:41:25 AM AEST
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| i love my pet rock... ok i dont have a pet rock... but this poem is so true... when love is given it is also received... you write so strongly about love venkat... i can tell you have been truely blessed with a life full of love, and not just any love but true love :) :) :) |
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Re: Smile please..
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:52:04 AM AEST
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absolutely beautiful and truthful, huggies n' love, nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Smile please..
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 05:56:15 AM AEST
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Truer words have never been written, my friend....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Smile please..
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 06:03:28 AM AEST
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An enjoyable read. Refreshing, even o'er years.
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Smile please..
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 07:11:28 AM AEST
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wonderful...the light of love is warm indeed
Shari |
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Re: Smile please..
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:46:01 PM AEST
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| Venkat, this is wonderful. I loved this write. Very well done my friend. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Smile please..
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 04:11:46 PM AEST
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Sadly some people cannot accept the concept of love and happiness. Smile and the world smiles with you is a great saying. It is like the more love you give the more you get in return. I feel sorry for the lost souls filles with hatred and remorse.
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Rita |
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Re: Smile please..
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by arden on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 11:58:04 PM AEST
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this was beautiful. how true. a great write. i enjoyed it. :)
Arden |
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Re: Smile please..
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:15:54 AM AEST
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Oh Venkat kind Sir.......of all your poetry that I've ever had the privilege of reading......this is your very best. The Essence of divine being is LOVE...........How beautiful are your words as you explain what he does for us.....A Calm Heart.......of longevity........we must love inorder to keep it, and HIM.
Marvelously written.......this one will always be my very Favorite.
Poetic Love
consue |
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Re: Smile please..
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:39:01 AM AEST
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Very Beautiful Venkat One Of Your Best !!!!!!
Very True & Enjoyable Read Here My Friend :-) Keep Em Coming !!!!!!!!!!!!!
*****LoVe**AnGeL******
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by Black13 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:44:43 AM AEST
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Beautiful to the extreme sir Venkat.
Such a wonderous poem.
So true.
Love the style as well.
It's utterly amazing. |
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Re: Smile please..
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:17:13 AM AEST
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You truly made me smile with this great inspiring poem, my friend!
Greetz,
Hur |
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 11:12:55 AM AEST
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Your love for the written word exceeds beauty divine!You have mastered touching the souls of many who seek,*I* included. Precious to the eyes...beauty to the soul...your words make me feel...refreshingly whole! Thank you my dear friend...
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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by thumper on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 11:16:04 PM AEST
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Beautifully put. Thank you for the smile.; 0 ) It made my night.
Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: Smile please..
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:22:04 PM AEST
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| A beautiful piece, with much wisdom written within these lines. |
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Re: Smile please..
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:08:39 PM AEST
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| Venkat, you never fail to create outstanding pieces that capture the heart. Wonderful. |
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Re: Smile please..
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:28:53 PM AEST
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| great messages, venkat. ::smiles:: |
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by Archie on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 06:42:13 PM AEST
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This is an awesome discription of love and it's many forms
"Owe no debt other than the continual debt of love" |
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Re: Smile please..
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 12:43:17 AM AEST
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Bravo and so true:
"...Smiles will save our health
If love is associated by happiness...
As well this line will resonate in my being for quite awhile especially as this is the last for the night so I will take this into dreaming:
"...Love is the honey of time..."
Blessing
Yangdantien |
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