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Down and Away
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:34:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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"Down and Away"
By: Danielle
You tell me to forget him
He tells me to forget you
I feel as though my feelings
Have washed away
Standing on the San Diego Bay
This is and oblivious confusing day
The wind has picked up
It’s like one of those drama movies
I’m so lost
How will I be found?
I look around,
Try hard not to make a sound
I try and make things leveled
Found out I’m useful
Not gonna throw me away
But my feelings for you
I think are floating away
Down the bay
Far, far away
I spill my heart
You wipe it up
The lightning’s coming
And I need some help
And I’m sorry
That my feelings have washed away
It’s not supposed to hurt this way
I didn’t mean to hurt you like I did
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Re: Down and Away
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:43:32 AM AEST
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This Is A Sad But Written So Very Well !!!!! Hope Things Are Better For You Now !!!!!
Thank You So Much For Your Comment On My Dedicated Poem A ~ MOTHERS~ ENDLESS~LOVE !!!!!
I've Let It Get Me Down All Day I've Even Locked Myself In My Room & Been There All Day & Half The Night..Again Thank You !!!
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: Down and Away
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:57:00 AM AEST
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| you put alot of yourself in this one... great write. Ive felt this way. |
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