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One More Breath
Contributed by
Kore
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Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:56:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Something less to someone else
Is the way I choose to view myself
Twisted thoughts and a fractured heart
With its splintered crack now miles apart
Unable to express exactly how I feel
Because then it would destroy the lies that I've made real
Maybe this is just a passing phase
And this darkness just collected shade
Maybe now my Dad will wake
And one more breath he'll get to take
Peraps these thoughts will fall mute
And this depression will die at its root
Copyright ©
Kore
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2004-05-16 23:56:53]
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Re: One More Breath
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:32:32 AM AEST
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| I like the way the words go...so subtley...I love it..it describes how I feel...good job...keep it coming...dont let your mind take over you...let your heart do whats right... it always ends up the way it does for the best |
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Re: One More Breath
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 12:32:54 AM AEST
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| Nice good emotions with this one |
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