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Fragmented
Contributed by
HOPE4ME2
on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:46:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When I look inside myself,
I found I wasn't there.
Viewing all life's pain,
Looking into harsh despair.
Fragmented, left alone.
Unable to reach her pain.
Pressed against the pane of life.
Separated, untouchable,
Far from the freedom she needs.
In life's garden, she is the weeds.
Fragmented, unable to cope.
Searching for any signs of hope.
Fragmented in pieces,
Washed out to sea.
Fragmented, in search of me.
Copyright ©
HOPE4ME2
... [
2004-05-16 23:46:04]
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Re: Fragmented
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:48:38 AM AEST
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| I love this poem it is an awesome out put on the way you feel...keep it up it will work out the way it was meantto be worked out...awesome write keep it up |
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Re: Fragmented
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by Archie on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 06:33:59 PM AEST
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| Remember this song always and never take it for granted: Yes Jesus loves me for the bible tells me so" |
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Re: Fragmented
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by purplestary on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 01:17:08 PM AEST
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| great write. i liked this alot. |
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