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Untitled #4
Contributed by
TheReturnOfx7
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Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:29:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Guideing light when the darkest storm clouds form
A tiny voice in the summer breeze, refreshing and calm
The overall frustration that is breeded by everyday
Reduced to ashes swallowed up by a sea of compassion
Swearing by the melodies I hear within the rain
The sparkling clear memories reflected in each droplet
Provided with new inspirations, dancing on the mind's eye
Standing astonished that my old wounds had already healed
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TheReturnOfx7
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2004-05-16 23:29:12]
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Re: Untitled #4
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:59:00 PM AEST
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How wonderful......A great title might be....A Dream of Hope....just my thoughts.
Blessings
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Re: Untitled #4
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:08:06 AM AEST
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Very nice Jason....
I know you didn't ask for title suggestions
but how about: "Already Healed" ? |
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Re: Untitled #4
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:32:02 PM AEST
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I love the end! So positive... you word things so beautifully. :)
~ Dee |
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