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A Blue Orange
Contributed by
Randibee85
on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:22:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Have you ever seen a blue orange?
Would tell us if you did?
-Could a person believe a thing like that
as stupidly as you did?
Could you see a cloud
if no cloud was in the sky?
Without a dream
Without a hope
Your life will pass you by
Comments are hilarious
If cruel
But aren't you laughing like that bully did
when he'd beat you up at school?
And what about the way
you sing when no one's there?
To hide yourself is only
making the you loose what is there
So forgive yourself and move on
Complete another climb
Too many things are not done
Do not waste your precious time
~~~~~
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Randibee85
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2004-05-16 23:22:23]
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Re: A Blue Orange
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by Randibee85 on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:53:21 PM AEST
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EXCUSE ME
WOULD YOU TELL US IF YOU DID
I don't know what happened I swear I checked it 3 times. |
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Re: A Blue Orange
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by comfortablynumb on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 10:59:18 PM AEST
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| I liked this- it really made me think. Its good to question yourself every once in awhile. great write! |
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Re: A Blue Orange
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:11:02 PM AEST
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So forgive yourself and move on
Complete another climb
Too many things are not done
Do not waste your precious time
very true. |
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