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Blank and Black
Contributed by
Randibee85
on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:06:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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~~~~~
Dangerous
Lastly
Hide
Think
Breath
Why
Does it bring
That thing
That one thing
You lack
One more
Once more
Blank
and then black
~~~~~
Copyright ©
Randibee85
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2004-05-16 23:06:00]
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Re: Blank and Black
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:12:15 PM AEST
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it almost sounds like an abuse problem.
thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Blank and Black
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:21:39 PM AEST
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| I prefer a poem that isn't so obvious, that isn't cluttered with detail sometimes. This... blows me away. Fabulous. |
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Re: Blank and Black
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:22:48 PM AEST
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A very complex write, it was as if you were writing in a safe tone so to speak. Found it very interesting.
Blessings
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Re: Blank and Black
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by Randibee85 on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:25:25 PM AEST
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Wow, thanks.
This isn't my normal style of writing... Actually, I don't think I have a style.
I write most of my stuff while I'm on this site, no thinking, just write. |
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