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In a World I Don't Understand
Contributed by
UnfallenTears
on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 10:34:24 PM in AEST
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I live in this world
One that's difficult to understand
Hatred devouring countless souls
Who never felt God's hand
I live in this world
A world of endless animosity
Where one's pure hatred
Sparks another's curiosity
I live in a world of deception
No way to lose or to win
I'm lost in the darkness
Of another's shadow of sin
I live in this world
Among small children's fears
Age knowing tomorrow isn't promised
So they let go of unfallen tears
I live in this world
Where nothing is what it seems
But I can escape to the utopian peace
Inside a child's dreams
Copyright ©
UnfallenTears
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2004-05-16 22:34:24]
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Re: In a World I Don't Understand
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by fairy-of-ice on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 02:01:23 PM AEST
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| i really enjoyed this especially the idea ''where ones pure hatred sparks anothers curiosity.'' You're not alone when not understanding this world!! Great write! |
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Re: In a World I Don't Understand
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 09:26:14 PM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO! Roses at your feet.
This is a marvelous write. Plain, understandable for any of your readers which is very important! My what wonderful talent I find in your pen......just keep writing and writing and practicing.......you are exceptional by all means!
Poetic hugs
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