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Dreams of an Insomniac
Contributed by
Ecly
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Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 05:48:46 PM in AEST
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Close your eyes and breathe in deep,
It's heavy thoughts that prevent this sleep.
A crack of light and shadows on the wall,
they remind me of life and its inevitable fall.
The air is damp and a street light shines,
An ignition ignites and first gear grinds.
A whistling wind and the radio blares,
Inviting summer nights with unselfish cares.
I close my eyes and feel this last flight,
Eyelids sewn closed, it all turns to white.
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Ecly
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2004-05-16 17:48:46]
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Re: Dreams of an Insomniac
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by Keila on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 12:55:27 PM AEST
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| i like it, it has so much feeling in it |
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Re: Dreams of an Insomniac
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by teethgrinder on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:14:36 AM AEST
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I can really feel this poem, you've described it all really effectively. i like the bit about the sewn together eyelids it sounds kool
*pix*x
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